A Fight For Your Life! Poem by Ken e Hall

A Fight For Your Life!

Rating: 5.0


The super alien spies are all from Mars an’ bugger
By god they masquerade as coloured sugars,
An’ even name a chockie bar after their planet
Then cross the oceans on the back of a gannet
When you’re a youthful twenty
And live the life of plenty.
You think your body is invincible,
The enemy loves every part of your body
Aliens attach their weapons around you
To wear you and your heart apart,
Very clever to disguise their weapons as fat
Not just ordinary fat but wobbly jellified weapons
To fill your jeans an’ make you look full o beans.
This woeful plot the aliens ply for your heart to attack you
An’ die; don’t be fooled with those coloured sugars.
Run for your life buy some joggers an’ walk from the buggers
The irony is when you walk, those alien dormant sugars
Are forced from the tum to the leg muscles for power to kick those aliens In the butt and get you healthy wealthy and wise.
You see the light?
Get up from the couch and rise Sir Healthy Lot!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 11 December 2008

enjoyed reading this.Thanks for sharing

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Chitra - 13 January 2009

uplifting in tone,10+

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a healthy write..a truely walking poem

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Muhammad Ali 24 April 2009

Feeling yours......... nice poem dear Ken! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 May 2009

'The enemy loves every part of your body Aliens attach their weapons around you To wear you and your heart apart, Very clever to disguise their weapons as fat Not just ordinary fat but wobbly jellified weapons To fill your jeans an’ make you look full o beans' Yes..these lines speaks a lot...great poem..very imaginative indeeed...well done...simply great..liked it very much...very meaningful poem..expressed in an imaginative way..cheeers 10++++++++++

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and get you healthy wealthy and wise. You see the light? Get up from the couch and rise Sir Healthy Lot! ... thougtful and provking and so deep thinking.. i like it....10 read mine final adieu to jackson..... no spearate ways and come home

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~ Jon London ~ 18 June 2009

Hi Ken, this is brilliant...very thought provoking piece....we could have all the money in the world, but how would we ever enjoy it, if we don; t have our health...well written, loved the concept

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Smiley Hooker 16 June 2009

Of course, health is wealth! Clever and meaningful write! : -)

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a meaningful well done poem...

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Obinna Eruchie 21 May 2009

a very good poem that compares aliens with fatty foods that pose as dangers to our health.

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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