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Jonny Brackney (12/23/2011 11:18:00 AM)
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i did enjoy this one. if your bored, you can check out my poem 'flower stained with ink'. i think we have a somewhat similar style.
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Ken E Hall (9/14/2011 4:41:00 AM)
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Tactful imagery using the flower your weapon to win the damsel in a winning way to the heart, excellent+++++10 regards
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The 4am Poet Worm (9/10/2011 5:59:00 PM)
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wooooooooooow alot of images went through my head as i read this... love
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M Davis (9/10/2011 1:36:00 PM)
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Beautiful..., Vote 10+
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Marilyn Lott (3/1/2009 3:04:00 PM)
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Wow, you really worked your magic with your incredible images. Extremely sensuous and done in good taste. Excellent, Bret. A '10! '
Best Wishes,
Marilyn
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Kesav Easwaran (2/15/2009 9:11:00 PM)
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'Scaring all the fake men off who
Can only stand the sun'...
nice expression here...goes very well with the image you bring, in the opening line...good poem, Bret...sensual images all through...10
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Ashley Ormon (10/9/2008 8:19:00 PM)
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Very pretty poem. I like it. Has a peaceful flow to it.
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