A Grizzly Dream- Fun Poem by Lisa Cresswell Wilkinson

A Grizzly Dream- Fun

Rating: 5.0


The other night I retired to bed and had a crazy dream
That I was walking on the beach when I heard an awesome scream
Standing right before me was a great brown grizzly bear
wearing a tu-tu and a basque and a ribbon in her hair

She started piroetting in a Wayne Sleep kind of stance
then shouting over to me 'Do you like my ballet dance? '
'Please I beg dont call my shrink
The bear went on to say
I simply am a dancing queen my name is kinky Kay
She pointed to my bikini and yelled 'Hey you look daft! '
Have you looked in the mirror yet? I said and off I laughed

I woke up in the morning
My day was like no other
For who was standing on my step but Kays big angry mother!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 28 May 2006

What fun! Laughter is sometimes the best medicine for all our ills. Warm regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 28 May 2006

Yes YES YES! ! ! ! If laughter be our gardens needs then take another of Lisa's reads What fun! Love Duncan X

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Jerry Hughes 28 May 2006

A grizzly bear wearing a tu-tu? This I've got to see. Good fun...

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OMG that was heaps good. Where do you get this stuff? you are heaps funny.

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Deanna More 02 June 2006

.. What a delightful way to end a day! I'll be chuckling in my sleep! This poem's ending was a hilarious surprise. Excellent rhythm and rhyme. Very original, too! (10 points for you!) Dee xx ..

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Melvina Germain 30 August 2007

I agree with David and I love this little poem, it's nice to see humour in poems every now and then and not always the serious side or doom and gloom. This is truly and up poem, thanks for sharing Lisa.--Melvina--

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David Harris 30 March 2007

Lisa, this is a quirky funny poem. Your humour is as quirky as mine. I loved this. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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billy bob 28 June 2006

i loved it what more 2 say? ? ? .. one of the best 'funny poems'.. ive read... KEEP WRTING DONT STOP.. bcuz i will be here..2 comment on many of themm so u will see my name many a times: -) debbie: -) *KEEP WRITING*- (a message from kays cuzin)

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Brian Dorn 24 June 2006

Lisa, great ending to a hysterical poem... well done! ! Brian

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Scarlett Treat 20 June 2006

T'was this a dream-or a nightmare-but wait, that horse belongs in another story! Very funny, esp. the picture you paint of Kay, the Dancing Queen!

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