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A Handkerchief Surrenders

If I can but see
those reaching arms before me,

feel flat against my chest
your welcoming breasts;

for me this would content.

If I could but feel
that dizzying quivering
your touch makes,

that for me would content.

If I can see
my own soul stirrings
in your beckoning eyes,
my contour
fitting your contour
perfectly,

I'd sigh
the perfect sigh.

So close we;
paper thin
the space between;

that all points of contact
blend
smooth skin
against smooth skin.
.
Give me your handkerchief;
wave it
before me;

and here is mine
in sweet
surrender,
buffeted
by that perfect breeze;
my
and your
deep breathing
brings.
mutually;

handkerchiefed.

Submitted: Wednesday, December 24, 2008
Edited: Thursday, August 06, 2009


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  • Sreelekha Premjit (1/27/2009 3:15:00 AM)

    Lovely and romantic, reminded me of John Donne's poems.

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/3/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    A well refined and lovely poem. The use of word 'Handkerchief ' gives it a bit Eastern touch.

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  • Reshma Ramesh (1/2/2009 4:23:00 PM)

    aweeee sweet poem............well penned

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/28/2008 6:51:00 PM)

    Sublimely sensual.10/10

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