A Heavenly Kid And Me..... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

A Heavenly Kid And Me.....

Rating: 4.9


A pleasant morning it was
with mountains still covered with curtain of snow
under cool breeze with fingers in my pocket
was walking admiring the nature bit slow

dry leaves danced under the breeze
as if it liked my presense
and everything in this world seemed
to be done with some sense

like a Queens pearl fixed hat
pretty hill crownd with poor huts
As a symbol of love and care
one can see tender orchids there

for a while resting under a tree
saw a small girl playing with some stones
singing....one... two... and three....
for which her skirt danced above her knee

sudden breeze cleared the view
no girl..no song.. all was gone
just three stones are lying there
what happened? ..was just scared

rushed to the place where the girl played
just three stones I saw...no girl, no footmarks
couldn 't believe what I saw
asked myself was it a dream? ? ?

bending down I took a pretty stone
and I felt it soft and clear like a crystal moon
turned around hearing some noise at my side
there stood a girl with her mom seeing straight in my eyes

leaving her mothers hand she walked towards me
with a smile she gave me an orchid and said..
its been too long playing alone
and...her joy and happiness was always unkown

seeing the stone in my hand she said one
with a smile she pointed the second and said two
her tender fingers wrapped the third stone
while her lips uttered three........

with tears filled eyes and no words to say
I kept looking at the kids play
she shouted booo and made me laugh, and
with a childish voice she said.......common lets play................

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
premji premji 05 November 2008

beautiful lines.. enjoyed

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Nia Riz 23 December 2008

how beautifully you have written these lines...as you compare each and everything to a beaufty of life, you make it look realistic...i love the last line where she asks you to come and play along... a very beautiful poem sebastine... Nia

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Winnie Angel 27 December 2008

a nice and trully beautiful poem....i liked the thought in it.. Winnie

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Vaibhav Pandey 05 January 2009

very beautiful my friend...

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Marria Attar 11 January 2009

very nice poem...beautifully written!

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Obed Souza 17 July 2009

Great poem! Wonderful images. Nice doing!

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 May 2009

wow...wonderful work..really a very lovely poem... such a wonderful and beautiful picture flashed before me while reading this great imaginations being shared... this piece has life...very visible descriptions..really great.... 10+++++

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 26 January 2009

a lovely story..a divine young girl...a story in words with a lot of pictures

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Genesis Learny 15 January 2009

as i read this poem i can visualize what im hearing and thats how you know its a good poem.NICE JOB!

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Young One 12 January 2009

it's like a story a friend told me once, very riviting.

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