A Hero Is One Who Falls Asleep With His Shoes On Poem by Wes Thompson

A Hero Is One Who Falls Asleep With His Shoes On

Rating: 3.6


When dusk dissolves the last shreds of light,
Do heroes lay awake at night?
Or do they dream, brilliant days to come-
With a winning smile, good deeds all done?
Perhaps defeat creeps with them to bed,
As a rusty nail in the back of their head.
Maybe all they wish at night,
Is for dawn to kill their dreamless fright.
Mayhap they do not wish at all,
As full moons unwind and fate befalls.
For surely all taste Fate's stale breath-
No might of man may outlast Death.
All men, no doubt, serve God's demand,
And are wrung like wet socks into Life's thirsty hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rahman Henry 10 September 2015

Beautiful poem. Splendid one. Thanks for the sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2015

Life's thirsty hands. Nice work.

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Rahman Henry 10 September 2015

Outstanding Poem. Thoughtful and significant. I've translated this poem into Bengali for our Bangadeshi readers who like to read world poetry in our mother language.

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Kinyua Karanja 10 September 2015

No might of man may outlast Death. true nice poem

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David Wood 10 September 2015

A truly outstanding poem, every thrilling exquisite word a worthy 10

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Adeline Foster 21 October 2015

Or does life just go on for them the same as we. Read mine - Frustrated Plans - Adeline

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Rajnish Manga 10 September 2015

The title itself says it all 'One Who Falls Asleep With His Shoes On'. Thanks for this amazing poem which also reminds us that 'No might of man may outlast Death'.

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Godfrey Morris 10 September 2015

A well thought out poem. Enjoyed reading it. The flow was amazing.

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Patricia Grantham 10 September 2015

Enjoyed your poem about heroes and their vulnerability in life. The too have haunting dreams and shadows. Good write.

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Paul Reed 10 September 2015

I like this poem very much. The opening line draws you in and then starts you thinking about heroes and their vulnerability.

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