AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Rookie (Hyderabad, AP, India)

A Housewife Supplicates - Poem by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

After sipping off your coffee
Put the empty cup into the sink

After eating your food
Take the plate to the scullery

When the calling bell chimes
Answer it, without waiting for me

When I’ve to fetch
A vessel of water
your helping hand, please offer

Do read your papers and books
But don’t clutter them around

When the phone rings
Don’t pass the buck
But pick it up

I don’t mind
That you spend
On your cigarettes
On your drinks
On your games
On your parties
On your lavish tips
On this
On that
But spare me
Some pin-money
For my simple wants

Once in two months
Take me out
For a movie
Or a dinner
Or on a picnic

Once in three months
Give me a day off
And cook and serve me
Delicious home-made food

Finally
Treat me
As your partner
Which I really am
Care for me
The way
You care for yourself

[Mar 14,2009: : Hyderabad-500 056]


Comments about A Housewife Supplicates by AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

  • Rookie Rinki Nandy (12/24/2009 7:11:00 PM)

    it's rare and fortunate to find someone who cares. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 297 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (10/10/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    I enjoy the reality this piece represents-the pull and tug of life expressed in these words (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,455 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/9/2009 5:03:00 AM)

    Finally
    Treat me
    As your partner
    Which I really am
    Care for me
    The way
    You care for yourself...ya modern trend and necessary too as male domaination is going to be over and females solder allt he responsibilites, , , , , super write....10

    read mien come home...home bound (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (10/8/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    nothing much she asks for...sounds very reasonable (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 89 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (3/29/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    This poem very much reminds me the movie 'Mr.Pellam', by Bapu. Very well written Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Indira Babbellapati (3/29/2009 8:11:00 AM)

    most of the time all these go unheeded, don't they? it's much easier to put them down into a poem... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 6, 2009


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