Vanessa Hernandez

Rookie (06-20-1994 / Bejing)

A Journey


Journey of my mind still pending…
The heart is wound yet not healed up.
My aches were not filled with care
A tear touches another tear..

Mind still not woke up…
Love that left in the middle of journey…
My feelings and Emotions are in dilemma
Emotions has to live up or wipe off
Mind still restless…

Those care that tenderly love I deserve?
My life goes behind the curve
Journey of my love still pending…
Even I don’t know where I would be landing…

Again the fruit of love ripe off
Now mind behave diplomat
Feelings are confused…
Mind still abused…

Is Feelings and emotions again revive
Is it so?
Mind never takes rest…
Journey of my life still survive
Life is churning, the never ending journey
journey of my life still pending……………

Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2009

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  • Rookie C.H. Seow (9/24/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    awww...a sad yet beautifully written poem....my favorite line 'a tear touches another tear'..splendid...well my dear...life is such that it's a journey of never ending sorrows and pains...I wrote that alot in my poems...but do remember that life is for us to conquer and The Person Above is the guiding light of our life =D (Report) Reply

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