Treasure Island

Vanessa Hernandez

(06-20-1994 / Bejing)

A Lonely Tear


A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns into a frown
Trickles down the cheek
doesn't it make you weak

A lonly tear escapes.
A lifetime of mistakes.
A sad lonely heart
that others broke apart

A lonely tear is dried
So many nights it cried
A friend reached out their hand
And tried to understand

The lonely tear is gone
Life will carry on
With love from a friend
The lonely tears will end

Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2008

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  • Kesav Easwaran (6/20/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    'The lonely tear is gone
    Life will carry on'...

    Positive thinking there Vanessa...wise...life has to witness so many dawns...brighter than the ones that set
    Good poem...the words bring out the emotions inside in a most sober and subdued tone (Report) Reply

  • Emily Oldham (11/2/2008 2:20:00 PM)

    a mass of feelings are in this poem........... nice........ i like it, thanks
    Athena

    *** words will change the world *** (Report) Reply

  • May Namoc (8/16/2008 6:29:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem. thank you for sharing such a wonderful write!

    all someone needs is a friend and for the moment, i'm sure the bad things will end. if only for a moment. **10** (Report) Reply

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