Vanessa Hernandez

Rookie (06-20-1994 / Bejing)

A Lonely Tear - Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

A lonely tear falls down
A smile turns into a frown
Trickles down the cheek
doesn't it make you weak

A lonly tear escapes.
A lifetime of mistakes.
A sad lonely heart
that others broke apart

A lonely tear is dried
So many nights it cried
A friend reached out their hand
And tried to understand

The lonely tear is gone
Life will carry on
With love from a friend
The lonely tears will end


Comments about A Lonely Tear by Vanessa Hernandez

  • Freshman - 782 Points Indira Renganathan (6/24/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    Emotional tear..at the end to realise the value of love to free from somberness...good poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 270 Points Kesav Easwaran (6/20/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    'The lonely tear is gone
    Life will carry on'...

    Positive thinking there Vanessa...wise...life has to witness so many dawns...brighter than the ones that set
    Good poem...the words bring out the emotions inside in a most sober and subdued tone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Oldham (11/2/2008 2:20:00 PM)

    a mass of feelings are in this poem........... nice........ i like it, thanks
    Athena

    *** words will change the world *** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 342 Points Manonton Dalan (8/26/2008 1:09:00 PM)

    wow full of feelings.... i could imagine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points May Namoc (8/16/2008 6:29:00 PM)

    a wonderful poem. thank you for sharing such a wonderful write!

    all someone needs is a friend and for the moment, i'm sure the bad things will end. if only for a moment. **10** (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2008



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