Vanessa Hernandez

Rookie (06-20-1994 / Bejing)

Between The Raindrops - Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

dancing around in this wet abyss
with puddles around my feet
as the rain falls from the clouds above
i am in a world as beautiful as life;

as i spin blissfully
jumping around in joy
a little skip here and a little hop there
nothing can disturb this tranquil peace;

when nothing in life seem to go right,
never quite sure what tomorrow might bring,
knowing everything is for a reason,
the only thing that I can do is be my self;

as my fingers reach out to the falling raindrops,
i smile as i watch the rain come down,
softly sprinkling on my skin
alluring my senses into spring awaking;

as i surrender to the beauty of rain,
swimming in a sea of serenity,
a blanket of warmth surrounds me
as I fade into the darkness
letting my mind set itself free;


Comments about Between The Raindrops by Vanessa Hernandez

  • Freshman - 627 Points Indira Renganathan (7/11/2009 4:30:00 AM)

    Relieving the perturbed mind free....a happy heart sings 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 237 Points Kesav Easwaran (7/9/2009 1:01:00 AM)

    i am able to visualise a rain soaked heart here...a heart that's blissfully poetic...thanks Vanessa...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 2, 2009



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