A lady and I were walking
Where waters flow;
A lady and I were talking
Softly and slow.
This is what you were saying,
Lady of mine,
'I will be sad without him,
Yea, I will pine.
But he would never leave me
If he were free.
That's what my love in prison
Whispered to me.'
That's what my love in prison Whispered to me.'....so impressive with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.
Great poem. All said and done freedom is the way of life to enjoy.
Love eternised in so few words, outstanding piece 10++×
A poem of poignant feelings that touched me! I sometimes wonder how the people in prison spend their time without love. Loved this 'soft and slow' poem very much. The rhyming is excellent. I love poems that rhyme. Congratulations, posthumously, to the poetess on her poem's selection as the 'Poem of the Day' today! The poem gets 10/10 from me.
But he would never leave me If he were free. That's what my love in prison Whispered to me.'.......it's a beautiful loving poem; true love is always true feeling from the core of heart, true love never betrays though it gets many opportunity to cheat; true like lives always same whether it's in prison or free.....enjoyable poem; pleasurable to read this poem
If he were free. That's what my love in prison Whispered to me.'./// beautiful loving expression