a dot of affection,
is like a wave
in the heart!
you came,
in spite of scoldings.
it was'nt night,
nor it was pitch dark,
it wasn't day break yet,
no noise of the lark.
in such a moment,
two dreams bonded,
became true in a moment
turning into a legend!
lovely...... awesome concept.... a dream...so real.... thank you.
'in such a moment, two dreams bonded, became true in a moment turning into a legend! ' Such a lovely moment, neither night nor day... amazing poem.
TO ME IT APPEARED LIKE A BEAUTIFUL DREAM SEQUENCE! THANKS! -Raj
the fusion of moments...then magic was created....your poem is flawless...simply captivating
Ritty, Lovely style, good flow. I like this poem very much Tks Nooruddeen
A beautiful, magical moment, when a legend was born. I like the way of narration. A great write! I'll surely visit many times and enjoy this beautiful poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi ritty...namaste doing nostalgia today...dont u know its inetrnanational day for displaced persons did one atleast...; -) nice poem cheers