A Less Stress Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Less Stress

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No tesnsion or so much stress
The only way out is to confess
To go all out and think It over
I need no shelter or cover

I think friendship is treasure
It is thing of joy and for pleasure
It must be shared on equal sentiments
It has no scope for any other comments

Life may abe meaningless without love
It is like relation between water and dove
It can co exist with so much to give
It is firm commitmentt and words to believe

I would love to venture in open field
All feelings and care may be widely held
It is natural and has much to do with relation
Other material gain is out of question

It makes me to think seriously
I have longed for it continously
Now it has come to its logical end
I have found reliable and trusted friend

I may not claim it as prize catch
We are suitable and equall match
It may provide stable relation
I hope it to last it long without any cancellation

It has to be message of love and peace
I want to passs it with calm and at ease
It makes me to work more for harmony
It has been tried in past by many

What has been not understood so far?
We have seen it as cause of war
So much bloodshed was caused in past
That has been over since very last

The popularity can remain on top
If violaion is at full stop
Only peaceful atmosphere for living
Will help and strengthen the cause for believing

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kunwar Patel 27 September 2010

I think friendship is treasure It is thing of joy and for pleasure

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Kevin Carney 09 September 2010

What a wonderful poem, poeple should take heart to this.Gave me a lot to think about. Great job.

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Darshna Chopra 08 September 2010

It must be shared on equal sentiments It has no scope for any other comments

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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