Devil Poet (March 8, / House 11B, Road 28, Dhanmondi R/A, Dhaka -1209, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.))

you use all i know about poetry in this, and it sounds too good
very poignant write

I know my darling
You are angry with me
You must have thought me
a coward, a liar and an escapist
Yes, you are right
I have escaped from you
Because, I loved
another woman
a mother
My motherland.

Sir......your love for your country is so much evident in your poems.....and the way.......the mood of the poetry changes is fantastic......it starts with a plea to your beloved and suddenly it changes to the love for motherland......Brilliant.

‘I loved
another woman
a mother
My motherland….’

180 degree shift! Total poetic anticlimax!
With a but… its love for country to sever love of fiancée is great
Ten+ ++
Ms. Nivedita

Thanks for comments
Cordially invite to read and comment on
Enigmatic Navel
Lie Sly or other poems.
niv

PS You’re winner and your fiancée will love you more for your idealism.

beautifully sad.......

My sin is I loved my country


Rachel Ann Butler