Devil Poet (March 8, / House 11B, Road 28, Dhanmondi R/A, Dhaka -1209, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.))

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A Barren Time

To cultivate a barren time
To create a rose garden
You entered into an unknown time
We walk together
And we talked about
Birds flower
The river flowing from the moon.

We embraced each other
Slowly during a timelessness
The barren time turns into
A rose garden.

Devil Poet
Submitted: Friday, July 04, 2008

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  • Aijaz Asif (1/25/2012 12:27:00 PM)

    To cultivate a barren time
    To create a rose garden
    You entered into an unknown time, , ,

    very simple and beautiful write indeed.... Dream ah! dream
    don't know what to say or to give to one of the great poet....a geniuses write
    rgds
    balouch

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  • Riyaz Gupta (1/19/2010 9:39:00 PM)

    We embraced each other
    Slowly during a timelessness
    The barren time turns into
    A rose garden.

    ..wonderful concept.....

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  • Lady Grace (5/29/2009 9:17:00 AM)

    when you are inlove, you are inspired..grace

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  • Chitra - (10/17/2008 5:33:00 AM)

    togetherness brings life and nurtures a garden of colorful moments

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  • palas kumar ray (10/14/2008)

    Only mutual trust, walking hand in hand can yield roses to nourish the mind of Time. We al so eagerly hope Roses in our yards.
    Nice imagaery Ershad.
    (10+++)

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  • Blue Eyes (10/12/2008 8:34:00 PM)

    i loved the romantic setting of the poem u are really good at imagery stuff.great work.

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  • Asif Andalib (9/29/2008 9:52:00 PM)

    Love is so creative. I love the first line of your poem 'To cultivate a barren time'
    Thanks.9 for this piece.

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  • Gargi Saha (9/24/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    A lovely poem.............10++++
    Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?

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  • Penny Hemans (9/13/2008 11:32:00 AM)

    love like the gentle rain of spring: a depth of feeling flows thru this poet's work.. superb and graceful... thanks ph

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  • Ivor Hogg (9/12/2008 3:35:00 PM)

    Love like rose trees needs constant attention to produce a beautiful flowering

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