Lilyann Monahan

Rookie (2-10-68 / Miami)

A Lie - Poem by Lilyann Monahan

Don't lie and say you love me,
I know you don't at all.
This mission that you are on,
will drive me up the wall.
I'm not quitting any vice,
until I see your face,
Then I'll do as you please,
and get my sub space.
You're not in charge this time Sir,
It took me too long to get here,
where I make the decisions now,
If you don't like it, don't stay near.
You screwed it up the first time,
didn't realize I'm a prize.
And now you'll risk it all again,
and break off all our ties.


Comments about A Lie by Lilyann Monahan

  • Freshman - 971 Points Adeline Foster (2/1/2014 1:21:00 PM)

    Wish the comment below were mine because it sums it up exactly. Well done. Read mine - Despair -
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  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (11/4/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    this is a fine piece..well flowed...enjoyed reading.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nivedita Patnaik (10/23/2013 1:49:00 PM)

    The last 4 lines says it all....the choice of language is aptly used...loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013


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