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a little beat

the day’s work is done
the sun sinks in the east
and we have showered and eaten
and the machine slows down;
still, there’s a little beat in there

Submitted: Thursday, April 02, 2009
Edited: Monday, April 06, 2009


Comments about this poem (a little beat by Raj Arumugam )

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  • Duh Huh (4/12/2009 3:55:00 AM)

    As long as theres a little beat, theres a fire and if theres fire, there's life my friend. Short, sweet and beautiful, thank you for sharing. :)

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  • Erhard Hans Josef Lang (4/5/2009 3:11:00 AM)

    While even stillness is aflutter with voices from outer mind, the chant of that rhythm beating out the world to come alive divine-inspiration of lovely tunes as source of crude noises-though at hide-&-seek play with all, guides their friendly hosts unheard

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