A Little Poem Poem by Nancy Wang

A Little Poem

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes, you made me feel that
I'm speaking to myself
There's a vioce comes from heaven
You're my soul mate.
I love you more than myself
and you know me more than myself
Just like a worm creeping in my vein
It eats my flesh and drinks my blood
But the feeling is so strong and strange
It dazzling me
If you ask, I will give
WHATEVER
even my destiny to Azrael
and I'm willing to become
your own Vampire.
If only, I can live with you
life after life, death after death
till the end of this crazy world.
-To the one I loved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 15 April 2009

very passionate write..well expressed...nice...10

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Joseph Poewhit 15 April 2009

Very fine testimonial of love

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

an emotional and passionate write beautiful work my friend as are u

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 May 2009

Beautiful composition,10+

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Akram Awadat 18 May 2009

very nice poem, well done thanks nancy

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 28 April 2009

a little poem equals to a great poem! brilliantly displayed and expressed..u amazing! well done!

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James Mclain 27 April 2009

If the men could only know what the women in their life go through when life is soon..a boon...iip...thank you..

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Myrtle Thomas 27 April 2009

Very deep Nancy, good job

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