nicky joyce

Rookie (17 08 81 / devon)

A Lost Good Friend - Poem by nicky joyce

I sit here with a shocked face
Cant explain what just took place
I get told that a friend has died
What do i say i just want to cry
I wanted to say im sorry to hear
But when i went to say it
Nothing would appear
I wanted to say your joking
That its not true your lieing right
But what i feel is nothing at all
What about his family
they got the call
There pain there suffer
They lost it all
They lost there dad husband to
We lost a friend
A good one at that
One of cheer and full of yap
Loved his bikes and family to
A great guy through and through
I know you wont see it
Or read it all
But your with us always
S R F this is for you x


Comments about A Lost Good Friend by nicky joyce

  • Veteran Poet - 1,325 Points Shahzia Batool (1/21/2012 12:27:00 PM)

    your poem reminded me a quotation by George Eliot our dead are never dead to us until we have forgotten them...it made me really sad! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Deepak Chhapolia (1/11/2012 11:00:00 AM)

    grief in brief with emotions high, y one cant stay by..y e'one got to say bye? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Margaret Beil (1/7/2012 7:08:00 PM)

    But held forever in our hearts. Lovely poem Nicky (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Virginia Pecho Gely (1/7/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    Simple words to describe real sentiments, a rhyming fluidity, love this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Heyyou Boy (1/4/2012 3:27:00 AM)

    A touching ode to a dear friend. The poem is a good one with really good flow. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 4, 2012


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