A Lovely Love. Poem by Dheeraj

A Lovely Love.

Rating: 5.0


Standing few yards,
Away from her gate.
In a foggy morning,
Waiting for her wait.

To come and open,
The unfortunate gate,
That prevents me everyday,
To see my soulmate.

I heard a cracking sound,
Perhaps the opening of the gate.
Was going to take place,
After a long pause of wait.

As I stepped ahead,
To make it more clear.
Whether it was some otherone
Or my lovely dear.

I saw her partial face,
Her uttering eyes and curly hairs.
As her lovely lips and dimpled cheeks,
Were covered and looked unclear.

Only our eyes encountered,
And we both made a swear.
To see us completely,
Without any social fear.

I then moved ahead,
Without looking back to rear.
Because we secretly made a promise,
To love eternally forever.

Sunday, October 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 22 October 2017

Woooww such a lovely poem, Kumar...10+++++

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Dheeraj 23 October 2017

Thanks for your appreciation.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 20 March 2019

I am quite sure she now trudges along side with you go the the jungles in silence as I always do now you two I abandon the jungles for you love be in the air for only two both of you

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Pallab Chaudhury 15 August 2018

Wow! Very lovely and nicely penned one... Thank you for the poem being shared. With best wishes.

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Chinedu Dike 22 January 2018

Good rendition of words from the heart embellished in beautiful rhyme. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Kumar.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 December 2017

Looks like love is in the air! Take care and have a blessed day.

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Dheeraj 14 December 2017

Thank you for your words! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 December 2017

Because we secretly made a promise, To love eternally forever. at the end you make a big step forward to promise and promise to keep the promise...... thank you dear poet for this love poem. tony

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Dheeraj 10 December 2017

Thanks for your understanding and appreciations.

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