Pablo Loves Life

Rookie (South Africa)

A Lovesong On The Phone - Poem by Pablo Loves Life

With the stereo loud
he tried to sing to me
a lovesong

I listened to the same frequency
a smile appeared...
before the tear

I know i'm being silly
but never has anyone loved me so
to sing me a song
out of tune..
or even to writr me a poem

Never has anyone spoken to me
in such a way
showing me the way of true love

Turning the stereo down
Ii softly joined in the song
tasting the tears on the lips he kissed

Knowing I could never again
love someone so much...
my sweet voice carried the song


Comments about A Lovesong On The Phone by Pablo Loves Life

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (3/21/2008 9:50:00 AM)

    good expression of love emotion (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Effie Yalena Steyn (12/13/2007 3:28:00 PM)

    Stirring.
    Well written.
    Effie xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marie Bliss (12/10/2007 6:24:00 AM)

    I love that he sang it out of tune and that it was music to your ears, bravo, Marie x (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 29, 2011


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