chidiebere franklin

Rookie (09/09/1993 / NIGERIA)

A LOVING DAD


I wish I had my dad by my side
Just thinking of him makes me cry
Never being able to get to know him
Hurts me inside everyday that goes by
The stories I hear
To my eyes they bring a tear
Before I had to say good-bye
I wish with him I had more time
My mom lets me know how much he cared
Since I was too young to have my own memories to share
Seeing pictures of him I want to know
Why so soon he had to go
Good things that he did to help someone else
Hearing about that just makes my heart melt
I just hoped that the time with him could have been longer
Because I know he was a loving husband and father
I am sad that we are apart
I miss my dad with all my heart

Submitted: Tuesday, March 09, 2010

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Comments about this poem (A LOVING DAD by chidiebere franklin )

  • Freshman - 2,088 Points Hans Vr (7/16/2010 10:45:00 PM)

    This is a very good poem.
    Full of feeling, great verses.
    I pray for your strength. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points David Beckham (7/16/2010 3:10:00 PM)

    Okay, ...this is a 10/10..absolutely fantastic. Everything element captured with great vivid details! Excellent. loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/15/2010 9:53:00 AM)

    So heartfelt! An amazing emotional write straight from the heart. My father died when I was two..never knew him..So enjoyed; D (Report) Reply

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