'A Man Lost His Paradise On Earth' Poem by shymaa awad

'A Man Lost His Paradise On Earth'

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“A Man Lost His Paradise on Earth”
I have done what I could do
My heart was an Eden to you
And how a pure paradise it was!
Even that, you left without a cause.

Your sorrows I buried in my heart
Your smiles I drew on my lips
Your absence I bear it with hurt
And love, loyalty reached within its depth.

Yet you decided to leave
Your only paradise on earth
You dared to make it a deserted place
And then stopped to watch the wreck of Eve.

But you left a beam of light in my heart
It’s not the hope of your return
No. it’s the chance of making anew paradise
For a holy love birth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 25 October 2008

Lovely, interesting and touchy poem. Nicely composed. Love it with my 10.

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