M Rene Riel

Rookie (July 18,1961 / Plattsburgh New York USA)

A Memory Shall Flow - Poem by M Rene Riel

Into a melody, a memory shall flow
Guided by an echo, and, ever so slow
O're to the mountains, t'is dancing on a breeze
T'is the echo laughing with the trees.

Into the sky to the path of the unknown
A great many memories, o're the miles have flown
Remember an echo has a memory in tow
T'is yours for the picking, t'is yours to show.

Into an echo conducting its humble chores
When to look upon a memory is completely yours
Building a mountain of memories an echo's test
To pick from a tree, the memories I like best.

Comments about A Memory Shall Flow by M Rene Riel

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/25/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    Lovely and beautiful 10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Oldham (9/20/2008 7:49:00 AM)

    it's all lovely, especially the first couplet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (8/27/2008 7:11:00 AM)

    Memories. Some good some bad but something we all have. Good use of words to emphasive this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (7/22/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    nice one, great rhyme there (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 15, 2008

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