M Rene Riel

Rookie (July 18,1961 / Plattsburgh New York USA)

A Milestone Of The Heart - Poem by M Rene Riel

A milestone of the heart
Has the wind for a friend
Tis inspiration for the soul
That stays true to the end.

A milestone of the heart
Is a road's lightened breeze
Tis the spirit of a friendship
Heard laughing in the trees.

A milestone of the heart
May be but a disguise
Tis the spirit of its knowledge
And whispers of the wize.

A milestone of the heart
May beat steady and slow
Tis the making of the wind
Where kindred spirits grow.

Comments about A Milestone Of The Heart by M Rene Riel

  • Gold Star - 4,932 Points Ken E Hall (9/21/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    A lilting meaningful poem with a last line that sews it up
    with skill a milestone of your heart +++++10
    kind regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/11/2009 2:28:00 AM)

    yes; inspirational write...the second stanza lines i most liked...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (5/5/2009 3:12:00 AM)

    a superb and magnificent poem..truly perfect! great write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/21/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    Well crafted and done, dear fellow poet Rene Riel. I give it a 9++ (Poems about 'Heart' are difficult to fetch a 10) . Yet, you are a gifted talent. If you choose other themes you can approach high levels of quality poetry. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Oldham (9/20/2008 7:51:00 AM)

    this is beautiful. that's all i can say. it's beautiful, a wonderful poem. thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 12, 2008

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