A Mermaid's Tale of Concrete's World
I am watching the sea from this concrete's world;
Turquoise blue happy waves;
Grey unhappy waves;
Green lost waves;
Black waves which shows Poseidon's anger;
Little waves;
Big waves.
All the waves are confined in this world of concrete;
The sea is enormous, it is prodigious;
What is sea? Is it he or she?
Why can I not embrace thee? ?
Why I feel so numb when I am near thy immensity;
though I love thee alike Tithonus's love for Aurora?
Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea?
Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world?
Then hey Lord let me be free...
Let me embrace the Sea..
Let me go inside you and
Let me be blend and united with you and
Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty...
Am I being punished by the Lord of Sea? Is it for imprisoning you in this concrete world? good; impressive expression good 10+++++++++++++
This is a nice tribute to a sea. Sea waves have been metaphorically compared to different colors and dimensions. 'Let me compliment you with my untouched beauty... ' This is a very warm compliment!
Wow fantasy imaginations poem. Written superbly. I lov watchin waves too. Do read my latest poem too.
seems the mermaid is now feeling like a fish out of water........on a concrete jungle......
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow, unique and imaginative. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)