Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 274 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

A Midnight Song... - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

A midnight song was floating on,
My dream was watching on;
To reach it out, to sleep it on
How longed my mind forlorn!

A midnight song was pouring on,
My thirst was hoping on;
To drink it sweet, to feel it soft
How longed my heart forlorn!

A midnight song was raining on,
Misty meadows drench on;
Amidst I saw you coming down
To quench my love you on!

Comments about A Midnight Song... by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • Freshman - 787 Points Patti Masterman (12/2/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    What a song. I love the meter and harmonics. Very crafty crafting, indeed! (smile) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (10/19/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    Beautiful words. The flow was very classy and stunning. A very romantic piece. Excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rachel Ellard (10/12/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    only the great deserve to is your turn sir. amzing and inspiring. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/31/2009 6:44:00 AM)

    A midnight song was raining on,
    Misty meadows drench on;
    Amidst I saw you coming down
    To quench my love you on! '

    you write most beautiful pieces sir..
    i v seen in the site, many lady poets write about love and affection while, older people like you write thought provoking serious stuff.... I d say you a great poet, who writes from the heart and these expressions are very beautiful indeed....
    I enjoyed this one..

    with lovesss
    shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (7/20/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    fantastic! ! ! ! ! ! i like your poems! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/12/2009 10:11:00 AM)

    I can feel the coldness of the midnight hour even in the summer, not without the one that you loved, besides you.Enchanting melody! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rosalita Fernandez (6/15/2009 1:11:00 PM)

    (not much else i can say in 20 things! but it was purely beautiful!) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,543 Points Saadat Tahir (6/1/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    hi kesav..its fabulouss
    lilts as adistant melancholy flute...distant in a starry night... a weary traveller harkens

    its atenner
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sneha 'The Poetess' (5/31/2009 3:14:00 AM)

    that was beautiful....worth reading....thanks for sharing it....! ! ! ...
    wonderful indeed.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noha El3wdy (5/30/2009 8:52:00 PM)

    wooooow, thats impressive.
    the title is cool (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (5/24/2009 7:02:00 AM)

    Musically Mystical - you are an inspiration. Moving from one poem to another - the waiting inbetween exciting, the end rewarding.Thank you for this pleasure (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anjul Agrawal (5/15/2009 10:56:00 PM)

    a very nice poem. its wat weall want (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,392 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (5/7/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    This poem is mystically beautiful and inspiring: a midnight song. That's powerful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Raj Arumugam (5/7/2009 12:18:00 AM)

    a wonderful lyric with resonating words and deep meaning...beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Kranthi Pothineni (5/4/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    The song is really good. Rather then saying 'A midnight Song' it can be a 'My Love Song'. The rhyming and rhythm is well captured hear. Beautiful work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Subroto Chatterjee (5/1/2009 10:25:00 PM)

    Age seems to have no problems for you....mentally agile and...virile! ! !
    The imagery's strong enough to call it beyond imagination alone...

    Live on..
    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (4/27/2009 6:54:00 AM)

    A wonderful rhythm and rhyme for the music of the night.Thank you.10+
    Best wishes.
    A. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Bonnie Collins (4/2/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    Enjoyed this very much and liked how you incorporated nature so well... Very nicely done... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Janice Windle (2/10/2009 6:20:00 AM)

    I like the sequence of weather and atmosphere you have built into this midnight meditation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (2/9/2009 11:58:00 AM)

    enjoyed it. love how you made the simple rhyme not so simple and work for you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 30, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011

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