Michael Hopkins

A Moment Of Liberation - Poem by Michael Hopkins

Let not the outside

Distract you

No more


Feel that joy within

Which bubbles up

From an undefined


Bubbles up naturally

As a spring from

Deep within the Earth


This joy is not just of this Earth


A joy

That comes from a place

Deep within yourself

A place unguarded

Fully accessable

The watchman has left

Due to the billance

Of a Light


The cells of the human body

Sing with joy

The heart awakens


Is enlivened

Peace is at hand


A lion speaks

To a lamb

Angels speak to one another

As the Earth responds

A chorus begins

A song sung in the freedom


A moment of liberation


A union is formed

Hearts sing out

A song of Love

Heaven and Earth respond

And Peace

Prevails for this moment

As joy returns

As God and Man



Be as one



Poet's Notes about The Poem

Note: This poem was written on August 23,2013 and published for the first time today here on my blog.

Comments about A Moment Of Liberation by Michael Hopkins

  • Gold Star - 10,009 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/16/2013 3:21:00 AM)

    Not a fun to read a poem without punctuation marks! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 76 Points Michael Hopkins (9/17/2013 9:13:00 AM)

    Dear Words' Knight:

    That is my intention. I am very aware of the proper use of puntuation. I have chosen to have a cerain style that is flowing or uninterupted. If i were an English Teacher this would be unacceptable. My poetry is written from a place of creativity in which I have the freedom to write my own rules and I do.

    So rule number one is: Throw out all puntuation.

    Rule nuber 2: Be ready to deal with the critics.

    Thanbks for your comment. i do appreciate that you took the time to write me a messsage.

    Kind regards,
    Mike (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Words' Knight (9/16/2013 4:22:00 PM)

    A complete absence of punctuation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 7, 2013

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