A Mug Poem by Malgorzata Jankowska

A Mug

Rating: 5.0


one mug for two of us

golden
sprinkled with some snow
with a scar on its cheek

hot
it's scorching our united palms
and hungrily
it's drinking off
our cool tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 17 July 2008

Wow! fantastic metaphor How about this One mug of stew for two Golden sprinkled warmth with cheese topping the warmth of our comming hot It's sealing our united palms And hungrily it's drinking fill our desire consumed. Smiling at you Tai, always looking on the bright side of lifes ride

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