A musket
What is this musket?
It is a Putana musket
In Suparnakha 's city
Both breast and nose felt ashamed
A heard of deer
The golden deer is knitting wool
Short dressed girls are accused
for their shamefaced
Lakshman can't run
Unknowingly many teenagers plunder
In Suparnakha 's city
Many guys keep their mind fixed that
Life is a night of bikini only
At present undergarments and sweats are
only an ancient narration
Strangely we mostly talk about the society And
throw the Putana musket to the weakers
when we come across them
Strangely we speak about to prevent the plastic
and again we cover our guilty by plastic condom
In Suparnakha 's city many adults who grab their age
keep their mind fixed that life is a youth only
Only needs for a costly bikini a lady can naked with an elderly person
Strange
Strange Putana
Strange Suparnakha
Had these situations in your days?
Hiroshima Putana
Nagasaki Suparnakha
A continuous battle is in mind
With red balloons Putana comes to Suparnakha 's city
Potato shopper looks at Putana
Two muskets are in his two eyes...
loved the translation.I have read the original one in Assamese, I know how difficult it is to translate the spirit, to translate the music within.
Many guys keep their mind fixed that Life is a night of bikini only..we cover our guilty by plastic condom Hiroshima, Nagasaki.... battle in the mind. a very fine and sarcastic social criticism which may open the eyes of many............ thank u dear poetess. tony
Thanku so much Tony..I am very happy to see that you read my poems deeply.. Thanks a lot
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Deepti, I came across your poems, by sheer accident today. Was very interested after reading the first one. Read all of them one after the other in one go. Marvellous... I read no Assamese. So missed out those posted in that language. Would love read more of your poems.