A New Day Poem by JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano

A New Day

Rating: 5.0


A New Day

Dawning of a new day…
Melting midnight fears away
Sleeping slumber eyes awake
Waking wishes to partake

Nightmare chills are gone
With the warm waking sun
Hoping the day joy partake
As these sleepy eyes awake

Awake till the dawn appears
Sunshine has its magic to share
Gone are the fears for tomorrow
Melting wishes have to borrow

February 16,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 15 February 2008

Such a warm, hopeful poem. It is a pleasure to read. Ten from me. Love, Sandra

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Thad Wilk 15 February 2008

A new day is dawning, welcoming all to a magical morning! A delight to read! ! ! *10*! ! Thanks for sharing JoAnn, David and Meggie! ! Friend Thad

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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 16 March 2008

Finally I made it over to check out your combined work as so appreciate all three of your guys poetry! ((Smile)) This is a wonderful, short and sweet piece that holds one captive by their images of a New day... Thanx for sharing your creativity in this way....10! Shelley

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Riquetta Elliott 23 February 2008

This is a wonderful masterpiece keep it up.

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Lee Degnan 17 February 2008

Very sing-song... I like it! A nice introduction for me to read as first of your joint efforts! Reading on! :) Hugs, Lee

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 16 February 2008

I always look to the morrow, not to the past and all it's sorrow, what awaits me only time will tell, so long my friends no time to dwell.. Andy x

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Melvina Germain 15 February 2008

A very beautiful poem, excellent rhyme, good flow. I enjoyed the read very much, excellent poem once again trio. Melvina

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