A New Day Poem by lindsay rose
A New Day
i woke up today
when the sun in my eyes
a smile on my face
and no need to cry
the last fee weeks have been hard
i just cant seem to get things right
and the hardest part of everything
is every lonely night
today i think i got it right
i new just what to do
i'll work as hard as i can
and come right back to you
That's marvelous! ! would be better if the words were rhyming..
short but still so sweet and to the point in a very vibrant and creative way. well written. Jen
The hardest part of eve ry thing is lonely nights, good write.. keep writing...read lots and lots of poetry. you have a poetic voice.
there's always a new day, a new life to work on. And every new day means to move on no matter what. Each new day is a miracle, a new beginning, a new love... the theme of this piece is wonderful and lovely.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Verry well put Lyndsay. I like it