i meet a new friend today
he lives far away
he gives me helpful hints
like maybe writing about tents
i cant give you his name
cause that would be breaking the rules of the game
hes helped me alot
and i appriated dearly
he is my inspiration
thank you for all your help
This is much better and a very big improvement, remember to watch your spelling, I see several words that need work. A very Pleasant poem to read. Good job. Meet should be met, appriated should be appreciate, and etc. Lynn Not trying to pry but only to help if I can. Lynn
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I would like to translate this poem
I agree with Lynn, just watch your spelling and you will be fine.After you type in your poem go back and proof read it.God bless. Juan