leave me to my silence
and I will leave you to your laugh
leave me to my darkness
and I will leave you to your past
or let the silence take you
and let me share your smile
while the darkness is around us
if only for awhile.
Awww this is a lovely poem ~ it seems you to can capture alot in just a few sentences too! =) I love the mention of 'silence' and 'darkness' ~ are you a fan of Sylvia Plath? ~x~Sarah~x~
A very touching poem Ben I really liked this one. Short and concise it still managed to convey a great emotion in it. Keep it up!
wow that shares wat i feel inside that noone cares not even a little....great masterpices....
A poem evoking a wonderful moment in time well done Ben Karen
I've always believed 'good things come in small packages' and that holds true here. An excellent write.--Thankyou--Melvina--
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem. Short and sweet. I really enjoyed it.