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Eddie Rubio


A Night With You


When I Pick you up, I tell myself I am going to enjoy this night with you,
When we Sit across from each other at dinner, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When you hold my hand and we sit and talk, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When you are out there on the dance floor I'm watching you move so elegant and sexy, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When I come up behind you and turn you around, you look at me with them passion blue eyes, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When you kiss me so softly with your sexy silky lip, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When it time to take you home I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When you kiss me good night and I watch you walk away, I tell myself I'm enjoying this night with you,
When I driving home I think to myself, how I enjoy my night with you,
When I laying in bed, wishing that I can enjoy the rest of my night with you,
When I woke up in the morning I realize what just happen, that I just enjoy the most wonderful night with you.

Submitted: Tuesday, February 09, 2010
Edited: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

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what happen after a date with her,

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  • Romeo Della Valle (8/10/2011 12:20:00 AM)

    Wow! Eddie! Amigo! What an impressive and very romantic write that clearly shows your great poetic talent! It is a very exciting write which is well penned and poignant! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

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