Pretty way of comparison
All is not complete any way
Nothing is perfect in all way
It sighs for some moments
But the time will change its way
Pretty narrow way to perfectionism
Abandoned outcome that section the risk
Step to change and rest is hidden
Time is the leader, and self is the rival
It projects to you as you are the sinner
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Rightly said time is the leader and self is the rival......one tries to be perfect but rarely achieves always.......very nicely composed
a perfect story of TIME that leads, , , and the philosophy of 'eternal imperfection' is timeless, , after all we are human.. thanx for such a nice thought..
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I would like to translate this poem
I think time too is an imperfect computer program in which there is no undo command.