A Poetic Prayer Poem by Ashish Dimri

A Poetic Prayer

Rating: 4.5


I know, you don’t
enjoy reading me
I know , it lacks
metaphor and simile!


But, I 've poured
true emotions on it
As I am trying to redeem
soul of a culprit!



Yes, Tears, sighs or wails
had no impact on me!
Alas, I ate, drank and
acted care free!

That shame
Of being indifferent!
Of being a wastrel!
Can be mend


Allow me
to make a new beginning
May be,
I can turn into a blessing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 May 2009

Sometimes, it is hard to define a poem. We are always surrounded by poems, don't stop expressing yourself.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 May 2009

Tajmahal was built day by day. Every one starts from zero, and someday some of them become hero. This is a nice poem, I love the emotion, cheers.10++

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Meera Panigrahi 18 September 2013

Good one . poetry should come as leaves to a tree or not at all.

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Tobias Caldicott 18 July 2009

Quite good, interesting!

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Sameer Ahmed 29 June 2009

The first step towards getting somewhere is to decide that you are not going to stay where you are and indeed all what we gain or learn has its origin in true perceptions so a prayer well illuminated with aimful thoughts Ashish.....10/10

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Lady Grace 02 June 2009

like your prayer, allow me to make a new beginning..grace

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Joseph Poewhit 28 May 2009

Words have much self dpobt, attitude. Like a seed a poet grows

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Ashish Dimri

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