A Prompt Response From The Devil Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Prompt Response From The Devil

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'Hello! Mr. Scribbler I received your letter
which was addressed to the Queen.
I was there at that time while they were celebrating the b'day party.
What can I do for you?
I am also helpless these days
you know why? these paradise people
make ' Nytroglycerine' toys for better prospects.
I can do one thing for you if you like?
I'll make a multiple visa for you to the hell.
There you can live peacefully
and I'll give you a surety.'

Always your friend,
Devil de morals.

Dedication to my poet friend Nick.Percowycz

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 18 June 2006

Nimal, my friend, my jaw, gradually, dropped as I read this. By the time I got to the end it was on the floor. This is Nimal going off on a new direction; one that is highly humourous but one which maintain premium standard. Excellent my friend.

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Sandra Fowler 18 June 2006

What an amazing poem! Cheers for your rich imagination. I hope you will receive no more letters from this dangerous person. He signs himself as your friend? But since we are told that the devil is the father of all lies, it would be folly to believe him. Once again a good satirical write.Ten for this. Sandra

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