A Pure Cheating Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Pure Cheating

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I never knew it was cheating
It came as rude shock and devastating
I lost the grip and started melting
It was really the end of dating

Though it sprang a surprise
It was sudden fall from rise
It tought me enough to be wise
I was to pay for it a heavy price

You commited a treachery and made “u” turn
It was signal that you may not return
It started all the desires from inside to burn
How was I to face the reality in turn?

I can’t leave the burning house
It has left so much patience to rouse
I might have lost enogh of the courage
I am still in position to manage

It was not bound to happen
It did upset me now grouse has come in open
I must curb it from raking the controversy
I should tak to terms and remain busy

It may divert me from real scene
The pathetic conidtion is never seen
In the terrrible situation I have been
Though I am not much enthosusiatstic or keen

She may realize it and repent
I shall still offer no comment
It is not the way you break or make
The relation should always look genuine and not fake

I wonder how peoaple can face it easily?
How can they beat a person mercilessly?
If not physically then by treacherous action?
What else can be our outburst or reaction?

I shall remain calm and cool
Once only you can be made fool
No one can be blamed for this solitary action
It may add more bitterness and friction

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 04 September 2010

Very powerful poem. You have so many great lines with each different meanings. You keep it flowing and the reader totally hooked to the end. Super write.

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Darshna Chopra 03 September 2010

Though it sprang a surprise It was sudden fall from rise It tought me enough to be wise

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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