Dee Corpolongo

Rookie - 337 Points (09/ 27/64 / New York)

A Quick Thought On Time - Poem by Dee Corpolongo


To try to do the best that I can
Ideas are the beginning of a future plan
Making the most of whatever is around
Enjoying my life and the treasures I've found

Comments about A Quick Thought On Time by Dee Corpolongo

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (1/11/2014 9:22:00 PM) didn't say very much...but you covered everything important about time...
    wish I had wrote something like this... (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (8/24/2013 10:35:00 PM)

    Four good reasons why you succede in life
    four reasons that reduce your strife
    every reasob you will find
    that will reveal the mysteries of your time (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,563 Points Lyn Paul (8/2/2013 8:06:00 AM)

    So much said in just four short lines. Very positive (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (6/1/2013 4:36:00 AM)

    nice short poem, , , , truth told in simple words, , , , that is the way to live your life, , , (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 972 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (2/13/2013 1:59:00 AM)

    A profound message in a nut shell.! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,059 Points * Sunprincess * (12/10/2012 9:25:00 PM)

    i am trying to do the same, by making the most of everything
    and doing the best i can..this message is priceless. :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,112 Points Diane Hine (12/10/2012 4:14:00 AM)

    Great advice and a delightful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 4, 2012

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