A Real Poem Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Real Poem

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What is real poem?
Is it flow of words or natural theme?
Does it echo sound of water?
Does it have capacity to alter?

To reduce the agony and pain?
To give honest call to rain
Words to flow in the direction of sea
Mix with the splendid music of tree

No words of differing
No more suffering
Helping hand with some offering
Music to their help in altering

The complete scene in harmony
Bees to sit at once place with more honey
Peace and calm with flow of words
Is it not the message of lords?

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• Flow of musical words from the pen o f poet give message of all kinds! on A real poem From T A Ramesh 21 Jul • it is all you wrote on A real poem From carol 21 Jul • All these thing and sometimes anger and rage. Poems, for me are the language of the heart. on A real poem From Paddy Martin 21 Jul • A THOUGHTFUL POEM WELL WRITTEN! -Raj on A real poem From RAJ NANDY 21 Jul • methinks you've answered the question, imaginative write... on A real poem From wojja fink 21 Jul

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Chand Shikari 21 July 2010

What is real poem? Is it flow of words or natural theme? Does it echo sound of water? .........ael poem indeed....10

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Ken E Hall 21 July 2010

What is a real poem indeed...you have just wrote one hasmukh, a diifferent slant on poems great idea well put ++++10 regards

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Maulin Shah 21 July 2010

To reduce the agony and pain? To give honest call to rain.. the poems help a lot....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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