Mike Barrett

Freshman - 844 Points (June,1943 / Saint John, New Brunswick, Canada)

A Realization - Revisited - Poem by Mike Barrett

Who believes
He is powerless
Is a weak Soul.

Who realizes
He is powerless
Is a powerful Soul!

© M. Barrett – all rights reserved

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I reworked this poem some 20 odd years after first writing it. The word man was changed to Soul since, at the core of being, that's what each of us are (at least in my highest universe!) .

Comments about A Realization - Revisited by Mike Barrett

  • Freshman - 844 Points Mike Barrett (12/10/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    Hi Noreen, thanks for your input - much appreciated. I've taken a bit of time today to review and comment on some of you poems. They too are good! Cheers! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,999 Points Noreen Carden (12/10/2013 4:09:00 AM)

    Very clever poem with a clear message well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 10, 2013

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