(september fourteenth, nineteen forty-one / gardner, massachusetts)

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A Remembrance Of My Father

I saw you as you were,
Not as the person I last viewed -
You were handsome, strong and good,
Movie star looks and a great smile.

The body that died that day
Was small and shrunken...
Withered and skeleton appearing.
Nothing like you were.

You didn't want me around,
You wanted to die alone...
And I granted you, your wish...
Leaving you dying solitarily.

I said I'd see you next
Up there...and you nodded.
You'll be as I remember you,
Full of vigor and strength.

I may not know you right off,
Nor you, me...
But who's to say. what we
will discover,
on that great and glorious day?

Submitted: Friday, January 08, 2010


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  • Cynthia Buhain-Baello (1/9/2010 6:40:00 AM)

    Yes, fathers do not seem to want their children to see them pass away, and I can relate to your sentiments here. In simplicity, you managed to bring out this child-parent bond in perfect harmony in this poem, with the last closing line perfect and apropos. The title itself unites the whole poem - with a deep meaning.10+++++

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  • Tricia Flores-Bizal (1/8/2010 12:32:00 PM)

    Touching, as I just lost my dad to cancer in December.
    Thank you

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  • Rani Turton (1/8/2010 11:42:00 AM)

    That voyage of discovery already seems to have started. Poignant and genuine.

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