A Secret Poem by ritty patnaik

A Secret

Rating: 5.0


your first letter said two words
'remember me'
i tthought it was a joke!

in your second you wrote
'imissed you always after that'
seriously i wondered why!

but then, when you said
you liked holding my hands secretly
i realised, my palms were warm
and too snug, in your palm
as if i would never let go!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2009

creative piece...lot of imaginative skill behind...good poem...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

Amazing-both this poem and the style of presentation. Love it,10+

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 16 June 2009

Simply superb. Ritty ji............................

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