Without any experience
Without any feelings
Far away from enjoyment
Far away from smile
How can be a life exist
Even without any heartbeat.
In between a hard covering
Silent and lonely
Years and years together
How can be a life exist
But it's a seed with seed coat
Even without any heartbeat.
Wouldn't it be great
Wouldn't it touch the sky
But you have to water it once
You have to care it once
Before it flower and
Before you have a
Glance of fragrance.
your poem is really a heartbeat, great write, great feeling Silvi Tripathy. go on writing, I request you to read my poems if you have time. You are from my Bolangir, congratulation again to you daughter .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this one. Good choice of words. How can be a life exist is not correct grammatically me thinks.