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these last few months
i could feel you growing inside
felt you beneath my heart
was so full of pride
i had hopes for you
dreams too
was so happy
couldnt wait to meet you
i went to the doctor
had all the tests
was doing all things right
what i thought best
then the pains and bleeding started
this was unbelievable
this shouldnt be happening
its unconcievable
if i could hold you in my arms
for just one day
just a few minutes
before they took you away
why did this happen
what had i done wrong
why now
why this long
when i lost you
what was left of my heart
was shattered
from you too, now i was torn apart
nothing else mattered
i left the hospital
went back home
fell into my bed
crying alone
soon i will be holding you
for all eternity
then my heart
shall find serenity
sandy nobody
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Dajun Taylor (8/2/2008 3:07:00 PM)
I found your poem to be very touching, so much so that you even brought tears to my eyes. Me and my girlfriend just recently had the same horrible thing happen, so I can relate to where you're coming from. I am sorry for your loss. All the best for the future for you, it seems you've often a hard run of it. |
Charley60 K (12/29/2006 9:52:00 AM)
Oh, Sandy, no, no, oh so sorry. Oh, my dear, tears.....So sorry I am. You wrote this beautifully and so sad I am for you because this is a tender write. Delicate, to lose a child. You did nothing wrong, unforeseem occurrences befall us all as the Bible says. I am so sorry, and I hope that in some way you have learned or learning to live with this........words cannot even express..
It was still a very good write and so touching.....HUGS HUGS |
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