sandy nobody

Rookie (midwest, usa)

1 Last Tear - Poem by sandy nobody

look through my eyes
deep into my soul
what you shall see
is
a
dark
empty
hole

listen closely for my voice
for words you will not hear
the only sound left
is
the
falling
of
1
last tear

search for me
i cannot hide
for you see
i
have
died


Comments about 1 Last Tear by sandy nobody

  • Rookie James Foulk (8/14/2008 10:33:00 PM)

    this was a great one Sandy, very tender and warm. been some time since i read anything of yours, glad your still on poemhunter, (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie helena dombrowski (2/25/2008 8:53:00 PM)

    hey, i like how you can right about your emotions like that. i am trying to get better at it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (1/30/2008 12:24:00 AM)

    Very sad, interesting style both in terms of the sound and the visual appeal. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shannon Wright (12/23/2007 8:33:00 PM)

    I give this one a ten and can't wait to read more of what you've written. -shannon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie James Greene (6/27/2007 12:05:00 PM)

    Hi Sandy,
    I really liked this poem 1 Last Tear. It is sad though.
    I am slowly but surely transferring my poems here from Starlight. I am going to take advantage of the free e-book. I only have 48 poems so it should not take too long. I hope youare feeling better and I miss chatting with you.
    By the way, I always vote a 10 on your poems.

    James (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mandi Ducroq (4/26/2007 7:02:00 AM)

    Wow! Absolutely beautifully written... well done! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 26, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 18, 2011


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