Shamik K. Bose

Rookie - 1 Points (Jalpaiguri Town, West Bengal, India)

A Sigh - Poem by Shamik K. Bose

ONCE I put a sigh in the heart of the Moon

That sigh is still there

So when the dawn comes
The Moon sighs
With her, sigh All the Stars
In a blinking eye of a moaning heart
With hearts so heavy for the sky
Drops of dews from her tears
Carry that sigh to the world

I hear that sigh
When the wind rustles over the maiden river
I feel the sigh from the womb of a flower
When her last fragrance melts into the careless air
And a lover's dream is broken

Copyright: Shamik Bose 2009


Comments about A Sigh by Shamik K. Bose

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (10/28/2009 10:55:00 AM)

    such a lot of emotions you have put on the sky..the river and flower (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Clara Odelia Ciutara (10/19/2009 8:20:00 AM)

    Very nice written, very well described, and very whole touching (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Prakash Mehra (10/17/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    Wonderful composition. Specially, the last five lines are too good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 269 Points Seema Chowdhury (10/16/2009 6:37:00 AM)

    Shamik, this is a lovely poem. you have emptied your heart and showed the true feelings well done. keep on composing. you write well.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Thomas (10/16/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    Shamik, This is a nice poem, and your first and penultimate lines have wonderful imagery, so much so that these lines tell a story of their own and can be enjoyed as delightful word arrangements in their own right. John T (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 15, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 29, 2009


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