A Simple Ant Poem by Lazarus Knix

A Simple Ant

Rating: 4.2


The first April ant-
Dashes across my driveway -
Into a mowed lawn.

There and gone quickly-
Though something mystifying-
Was provoked in me.

These trivial things-
Swift as spring's jaundiced lightning-
Oft have most effect-
On the grins we bring,
And the song we sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rory Hudson 27 April 2009

Very nice. I agree with Kale. Lots of sensitivity shown here. In the third last line, just as a matter of grammar and spelling, I think you mean 'oft have most effect'.

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Kale Beaudry 27 April 2009

It seems the same inspiration ended up being a poem of nearly the same calibur. Referring to one of mine, which I just submitted a couple hours ago (Day in the Life of a Melted Plastic Soldier): funny coincidence I'd happen upon this. They both touch upon the simpleness of nature, and how the smaller things in life truely play a role in much larger ones.

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