A Song But No Lyrics Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Song But No Lyrics

Rating: 5.0


He's a ramshackle piano and his partner's cheesy finger tips
touch the wobble reeds.
The intonation of music comes out with his cries and her tears
like a salty wind from a consonant Ocean.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 02 May 2009

A poignant duo whose music haunts. Another fine poem from a master craftsman. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 20 April 2009

Excellent use of simile in this piece. The mood is definately blue. You saw it through your tears. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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